题目内容
书面表达(15 分)
假如你是赵辉, 就个人爱好带来的困惑给英国朋友Jack发电子邮件进行交流并请求帮助。
要点:
赵辉
| 爱好 | 对集邮感兴趣,经常和朋友交流 |
困惑 | 得不到老师的理解 | |
观点 | 个人爱好有助于学习 …… | |
老师 | 观点 | 时间应花在功课上,成绩就是一切 |
注意 : 1.词数:80个左右(已给内容不计入总词数)
2.内容必须包括上表中的要点,可适当发挥,但不要逐字逐句翻译;
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名,校名和人名。
Dear Jack,
I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.
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What shall I do ? Can you offer me some suggestions ?I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Zhao Hui
Dear Jack,
I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.
You know I am crazy about collecting stamps. In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read. This makes my teacher very angry. To him , good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons, even at weekends.
I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies. If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby , it will be of great value to my future development. But I don’t think my teacher understands me. I feel bad about that.
What shall I do ? Can you offer me some suggestions ?I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Zhao Hui
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇利用表格的给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细:要求介绍自己的爱好,及困惑,并阐述自己的爱好的观点,及老师的观点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,主语是第一人称和第三人称,注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】
这篇短文思路清晰,逻辑性强。首先表达自己的爱好,然后描述老师的观点看法,表达自己的困惑。之后阐述自己的观点,请求帮助。适当的连词,流畅的语言,为文章增色不少.
考点:表格作文