Question

8．根据以下信息，以"My friend"为题写一篇短文，不少于40词．

Name	Tina Smith	Age	14	Birthday	February 22nd
Country（国家）	America			Telephone	25688893
Family	father，mother，two brothers
Like	Ping-pong，fruit and vegetables，ice-cream
Dislike（不喜欢）	White socks，yellow bags，soccer

I have a friend，her name isTinaSmith，she is 14 years old，she is from America，her birthday is on February22nd，her telephone number is 25688893．There are 5 people in her family，they are her parents，her twobrothers and her．She likes playing Ping-pong，she likes fruitandvegetables and she also likes ice-cream．She doesn'like white socks and yellowbags，she doesn't like soccer，either．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
There are 5 people in her family他们家有5个人，这是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
She doesn'like white socks or  yellow bags她不喜欢白色的袜子和黄色的包．or用在否定句中表示并列．

解答 My friend
I have a friend，her name isTina Smith【开头点明主题】，she is 14 years old，she is from America，her birthday is on February 22nd，her telephone number is 25688893．There are 5 people in her family【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】，they are her parents，her two brothers and her．She likes playing Ping-pong，she likes fruit and vegetables and she also likes ice-cream．She doesn'like white socks or  yellow bags【高分句型二，注意or的使用】，she doesn't like soccer，either．【正文部分详细介绍朋友】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．