Question

【题目】书面表达

泗阳---这颗苏北大地上的璀璨明珠在过去的几年中发生了很大的变化。作为泗阳人我们感到自豪和骄傲。请根据下面表格中的提示，以“Changes in Siyang”为题，写一篇短文，向你的朋友介绍泗阳的变化。

	过去	现在
环境	又窄又脏的马路；到处垃圾；但却有大片开阔的空间；	宽阔干净的街道；路两边的绿化带；但开阔的空间却建起许多高楼；
生活	住在又小又旧的房子；空余时间打牌或听收音机；	住在新公寓里；在家上网周游世界；大部分人有手机
交通	步行或骑自行车	乘公交或打的；许多人有自己的车；

注意：

1. 词数80左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不记入总词数；

2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可作必要的发挥；

3. 条理清楚、语句连贯，无语法错误；

4．文中不得出现真实的人名等信息。

参考词汇：绿化带 green belts

Changes in Siyang

Many changes have taken place in Siyang over the years. __________________________________________________________________________________

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Now people here are enjoying a comfortable life.

Answer 1

【答案】

Many changes have taken place in Siyang over the years. In the past, there were only narrow and dirty roads in Siyang. There was rubbish everywhere. However, there were large open spaces. Now the streets are wide and clean, with many green trees on both green belts. The government has also built lots of tall buildings in some open spaces. Years ago, people lived in small old houses. Now most of them have moved into new flats. They used to play cards or listen to the radio in their free time, but now they travel around the world online at home. Moreover, mobile phones make communication easier now. In the past, people travelled on foot or by bike, but now they can go around by bus or taxi. Many families even have their own cars. Now people here are enjoying a comfortable life.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇表格作文。要求介绍泗水的变化。介绍时主要从环境，交通，生活三个方面进行。由于介绍的是最近几年的变化，有过去和现在的对比，所以时态上可能用现在完成时，过去时态。写作时要灵活运用。对于现在和过去的对比中注意used to的使用。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。语句及词汇运用灵活，如表示过去：In the past, there were…; They used to play cards…，Years ago, people lived in small old houses。短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色.如: Moreover, In the past，Many families even have their own cars. also等。