题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是Li Ming,你的朋友Billy 要来宁波。Billy希望他在宁波期间,你能抽出一天时间陪他玩,请你根据下面提供的信息,给他写一封回信,告诉他那天的安排。要求:70词左右(邮件开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数);时态准确;语句通顺。
8:10 a.m. 乘14路公共汽车去儿童公园(Children’s Park)
10:30 a.m. 参观保国寺(Baoguo Temple),因为这里很著名,有着悠久的历史。
11:50a.m. 吃午饭
1:00 p.m.去江北万达广场购物(Jiangbei Wanda Square),广场很新也很漂亮。
5:00 p.m. 去Li Ming 家做客。
Dear Billy,
Welcome to Ningbo.I am very glad that we can play together for a day.
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Yours truly,
Li Ming
【答案】
Dear Billy,
Welcome to Ningbo.I am very glad that we can play together for a day.
Let me tell you our plan. We are going to take a number 14 bus to the Children's Park at 8:10 a.m. We will have much fun there. Then at 10:30 a.m. We are going to visit Baoguo Temple.It is very famous here and it has a long history. We are going to have lunch at 11:50 a.m. After lunch, we are going shopping at Jiangbei Wanda Square. It is very new and beautiful.And the things are very nice and beautiful. At 5:00 p.m. We are going to Li Ming's house for dinner.
I believe we will have a great time.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
【解析】
试题分析:本题是一篇给提纲类作文。要求给朋友写一封信,介绍一下朋友来宁波参观的一天的行程安排。短文要以时间先后为序,对行程作恰当的介绍,短文用一般将来时态,第一人称形式。短文要注意词组的选择及句型的选用,要注意句式的多样化,使短文生动具体。
写作亮点:短文第一段表达了对朋友的欢迎及期待。welcome to及宾语从句运用得准确恰当;第二段第一句总起,然后以时间先后为顺序,详细介绍了这一天的活动安排。本段be going to,will的交替使用;时间状语的忽前忽后,注意了句式的多样化。层次清楚,具体生动。最后一段以“我相信我们将会度过愉快的一天”结局,与第一段首尾呼应。