题目内容
有很多人和事, 甚至一个眼神,一个微笑都会改变我们的生活。张贝就曾遇到了改变他一生的一个微笑。 请根据提示以“A special smile”为题写一篇不少于80词的短文。
内容提示:
过去 | 现在 |
1.孤独 2.没有朋友,害怕和别人交朋友 | 1. 同学的一个微笑改变了他的生活 2. 他试着与同学交流 3. 感悟 … … |
A Special Smile
A special smile
His name is Zhang Bei who used to be a very shy boy. He had no friends and he always felt lonely. He was so afraid to communicate with others that he would rather sit in the corner and do nothing.
One day his deskmate smiled to him. The smile was a sunshine and it broke his sadness. They try to talk with each other. And Zhang Bei found it was easy to relate his opinions to others. Now he knows that if you treat people sincerely, they will return you a smile.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据所给提示写写一篇以A special smile为题的作文。本文所给材料比较详细,并且给出了具体要求,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】
这篇文章语言规范,叙事清楚,词汇及时态运用正确,能够把提示的内容叙述清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。
考点:命题式作文