Question

Writing 10(2014 浙江宁波>

    假设你是Mike ,后天是父亲节，请你根据下面所给的信息， 写一封信回忆去年夏天与父亲一起爬山的难忘经历，作为一份 送给父亲的特殊礼物。

注意:①信中应包含所有提供的信息并展开合理的想象；

② 信中不能出现真实的姓名；

③ 词数:80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词 数) 。

Dear Daddy,

    It's a gift for Father's Day when you are reading it. 

    I still remember the day last summer when  

    Now,I want to say：I love you,Daddy.You raise me up!

    Happy Fathers Day!

                           Yours,

                            Mike

Answer 1

Writing 10

[写作提示]

1. 本文属于记叙、议论结合的文章，主体时态为一般过去时和一 般现在时；

2. 内容要点:①去年夏天与父亲一起爬山的经历;②自己的感受。

3. 参考词汇：rain on the half way 半路下雨;complain 抱怨;give up

放弃;put your coat on me把你的外套给我穿上；tell me告诉我;enjoy the beauty of 享受 之美。

[参考范文]

Dear Daddy,

    It’s a gift for Fathers Day when you are reading it.

    I still remember the day last summer when we went mountain climbing together.We started early in the moming.But,unluckily,it began to rain on the half way.I got all wet through,feeling cold and tired.So I couldn’t help complaining and wanted to give up.However,you encouraged me not to give up and put your coat on me softly.You said, “We won’t see the fantastic scenery unless we reach the top." You really cheered me up.We got to the top at last and enjoyed the beauty of nature that I had never seen.

    Now,I want to say：I love you,Daddy.You raise me up!

    Happy Father's Day!

                           Yours,

                            Mike