Question

书面表达

假设你是Simon，要给班主任王老师写一封推荐信，推荐David 当班长，要点如下：

优秀品质	主要表现
勤 奋	参加音乐俱乐部两年多，每天练唱两小时。
善 良	常与同学们一起工作，合作的很好，不介意为学校做额外的工作。
慷 慨	每年都捐钱给慈善机构。
助人为乐	有一次……

注意： 1. “有一次……”处须用3、4句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥。

2. 推荐信包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

3. 词数100左右，格式已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Wang,

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Yours Sincerely

Simon

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr Wang,

I’m writing to recommend David as our monitor. David is excellent. He has many good personal qualities.

David is hard-working. He has been in the Music Club for over 2 years. He practices singing for 2 hours every day. He’s very kind and friendly. He likes working with his classmates and never minds doing extra work for the school. David is generous, too. Every year he donates his pocket money to the charities. He’s also helpful. One day, on his way to the cinema, he found a boy crying in the street. He helped the child find his parents. Because of it, he missed his favourite film.

I think David has all the qualities to be a good monitor. I hope you can agree with me.

Yours sincerely

Simon

【解析】

试题分析：在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括四方面的内容。一是他的勤奋.二是他的善良.三是他的慷慨,四是他的助人为乐,在他的助人为乐方面,需要展开丰富的想象,另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者从提纲的四个方面，讲述了Dvide的优秀。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如One day, on his way to the cinema, he found a boy crying in the street. He helped the child find his parents. Because of it, he missed his favourite film.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如He likes working with his classmates and never minds doing extra work for the school.等。

考点：提纲类作文。