Question

书面表达（满分10分）

生活中你有怎样的习惯？好习惯？坏习惯还是健康的习惯？请认真思考，反思自己。以“ habits”为题说说你的习惯。

要求：1、注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范；2、不得使用真实的姓名和校名；3、词数不少于60个。

Habits

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Habits

I have some habits, some are good, but some are bad.

I like reading very much. From reading science books, I get a lot of knowledge. From reading novels, I lose myself in the stories. I like doing sports, too. It helps me keep healthy. Also I never put today's work till tomorrow. They are all my good habits. They help me a lot in my daily life.

However, I also have some bad habits. For example, sometimes I do my homework slowly, and stay up till very late. During meals I prefer meat to vegetables. And sometimes I play computer games too long without having a rest. They are all harmful to my health. From now on I'll try to keep my good habits, and give up the bad ones. Then I'll live better.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料极其详细，我们要做的就是要认真思考，反思自己，用正确的英语把自己的习惯表达出来。根据作文内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文表达准确，段落清晰。使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如:be harmful to 对……有害；give up放弃。 It helps me keep healthy. 它让我保持健康。Also I never put today's work till tomorrow我也从来没有把今天的工作留到明天During meals I prefer meat to vegetables. 吃饭时我更喜欢肉不喜欢蔬菜。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：话题作文。