Question

15．根据要求完成大作文
在你的成长过程中，许多人、许多事物一直在陪伴着你、支持着你、温暖着你，让你感动、伴你成长．请以"Say thanks to____"为题，写一篇短文．
要求：1．写出要感谢的对象、原因及感激语言；
2．语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
3．词数70左右，书写工整、规范；
4．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
She usually gets up very early in the morning no matter how cold it is．
句中"no matter how cold it is"为让步状语从句，这句话意为：无论天多冷，她通常早晨起来很早．
高分句型二：
If someone has problems or questions，she will help them warmly．
句中"If someone has problems or questions"为条件状语从句，遵循"主将从现"原则．这句话意为：如果有人有困难或者问题，她会热心帮助他们．

解答 Say thanks to my mother
My mother is a beautiful and hard--working woman．I think she is one of  the best mothers．（点明主旨）
She usually gets up very early in the morning no matter how cold it is．【高分句型一】She makes delicious food for us every day so that we can have a healthy body．My mother is very kind and helpful．If someone has problems or questions，she will help them warmly．【高分句型二】Sometimes，she is very busy with housework after work，but she always do it herself with a smile on her face．On weekends，she often goes to visit my grandparents and tell us funny stories．（妈妈的付出，感恩的原因）
I love my mother，she is always so kind to us．I must say thanks to her．（感恩妈妈，升华主题）

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