假设你是李华.最近你校组织了一场讨论．讨论的主题是:本市要不要修地铁?请你根据下表所提供的信息.给某报社编辑写一封信.客观地介绍讨论情况.并发表自己的看法．60%的学生赞成40%的学生反对1．方便.快速.安全1．花费太大.浪费钱2．节能.无污染2．应花钱建更多的公路和铁路3．缓解地面交通拥挤,减少交通事故3．可能� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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18．假设你是李华，最近你校组织了一场讨论．讨论的主题是：本市要不要修地铁（subway）？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给某报社编辑写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况，并发表自己的看法．

60%的学生赞成		40%的学生反对
1．方便，快速，安全		1．花费太大，浪费钱
2．节能，无污染		2．应花钱建更多的公路和铁路
3．缓解地面交通拥挤；减少交通事故		3．可能破坏某些地下文物古迹（cultural relics）
个人看法	…

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右；开头已写好，不计入总词数．
4）不得使用真实姓名和校名等．
Dear Editor，
The students in our school had a heated discussion about whether a subway should be built in our city．
Sixty percent ofthe students are for the idea of building a subway．Compared with other formsof transport，they think，the subway is more convenient，faster and safer．Itcan save energy and have less pollution．It can make the traffic on the groundless crowded and reduce traffic accidents．
However，fortypercent of the students are against the idea．They think that building a subwaywill cost too much．It's a waste of money．We should build more highways andrailways instead with the money．What's more，building a subway may destroysome cultural relics underground．
I think a subway isa sign of a modern city．By building a subway，we can travel around our citymore easily．But we should spend as little money as possible building thesubway．．

分析这是一篇图表作文．内容是客观地介绍本市要不要修地铁的讨论情况，并发表自己的看法．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1.60%的学生赞成；方便，快速，安全；节能，无污染；缓解地面交通拥挤；减少交通事故
2.40%的学生反对；花费太大，浪费钱；应花钱建更多的公路和铁路；可能破坏某些地下文物古迹
3．个人看法
常用到的重点短语：
compare with 与…相比较
make sth+adj 让某某怎样
a waste of 浪费
what's more 再者
as…as possible 尽可能…
【高分句型】
1．①Compared with other forms of transport，they think ②the subway is more convenient，faster and safer．
①过去分词短语做方式状语．compare with 与…相比较
②think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
2．①What's more，②building a subway may destroy some cultural relics underground．
①what's more 再者
②动名词短语做主语．
3．But we should①spend②as little money as possible building the subway．
①spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事
②as…as possible 尽可能…

解答 Dear Editor，
The students in our school had a heated discussion about whether a subway should be built in our city．
Sixty percent of the students are for the idea of building a subway．Compared with other forms of transport，they think the subway is more convenient，faster and safer．【高分句型】It can save energy and have less pollution．It can make the traffic on the groundless crowded and reduce traffic accidents．（60%的学生赞成）
However，forty percent of the students are against the idea．They think that building a subway will cost too much．It's a waste of money．We should build more highways and railways instead with the money．What's more，building a subway may destroy some cultural relics underground．【高分句型】（40%的学生反对）
I think a subway is a sign of a modern city．By building a subway，we can travel around our city more easily．But we should spend as little money as possible building the subway．【高分句型】（个人看法）

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