Question

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每个人的一生中都有许多值得感谢的人，你最想感谢的人是谁呢？是父母、老师、朋友，还是…？请以Tom为名给他/她/他们写一封信，说说你的心里话．
要求：
1.80个词左右．
2．表达正确，行文流畅．
3．至少写出一个具体事例．
4．信件开头、结尾已给出，不计人总词数．
5．文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、地址、学校等相关信息．
Dear，
Dear father，
I have never expressed my thanks and respect to you．Today I want to say，"I love you，dad!"In my heart，you are not only my father，but also my good friend．
Since I was born，you have given me all your love and care．In order to create a better living condition and let me receive better education，you have to work hard every day．I always remember your coming home late and feeling tired．
Except that，you are very strict with me．You often tell me to study hard，get along well with others，not to give up when facing difficulties．Once I got a C in the math exam，I felt sorry for it，I thought you would be angry，instead，you weren't angry with me，you helped me to find out why I failed，and encouraged me to be brave．Since then，I always smile at life whenever I have any trouble．Thank you very much for everything you've done for me．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇命题作文，所给材料非常简略，故动笔前先要围绕要点组织材料，确定写作内容．写作中注意将感谢的对象，原因等介绍清楚．在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性．本文时态问题比较复杂，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题，人称主要是第一人称，注意主谓一致问题．写作中适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．
高分句型：
①In order to create a better living condition and let me receive better education，you have to work hard every day．为了创造一个更好的生活条件，让我接受更好的教育，你不得不努力工作每一天．
in order to为了，引导一个条件状语从句，let sb do sth让某人做某事；have to必须，不得不； every day每天．
②Thank you very much for everything you've done for me．非常感谢你为我所做的一切．Thank you very much for sth为某某而感谢某人，for是一个介词，后面通常跟名词，代词或者动名词，you've done for me在这里作定语修饰everything，构成一个定语从句．

解答 Dear father，
I have never expressed my thanks and respect to you．Today I want to say，"I love you，dad!"In my heart，you are not only my father，but also my good friend．（引出话题）
Since I was born，you have given me all your love and care．In order to create a better living condition and let me receive better education，you have to work hard every day（高分句型）．I always remember your coming home late and feeling tired．（重点写爸爸为了我辛苦的劳作）
Except that，you are very strict with me．You often tell me to study hard，get along well with others，not to give up when facing difficulties．Once I got a C in the math exam，I felt sorry for it，I thought you would be angry，instead，you weren't angry with me，you helped me to find out why I failed，and encouraged me to be brave．Since then，I always smile at life whenever I have any trouble．（通过例子来说明爸爸对我的爱）Thank you very much for everything you've done for me（高分句型）（感谢爸爸所做的一切）．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Tom．

点评 本文是一篇小作文，写作时动笔前先要注意认真写作要求，确定写作内容；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改．