Question

3．假如你是李强，有一天在上学路上，你看到赵王河公园岸边的道路损坏严重，一些彩砖不见去向，影响人们的出行，请用英语给China Daily菏泽频道写一封信，反映这一问题，并提出你的看法和建议．

（一）参考词汇：destroy毁坏；color bricks彩砖；disappear消失；repair修复；take measures采取措施；protect保护；public facilities公共设施
（二）其他要求：100字左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数．
Dear Editor，
I'm a high school student．            
Li Qiang．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
 One day，①on my way to school I found②that along the river bank in Zhaowang River Park，the road ③was badly destroyed and some color bricks had disappeared，④which would affect people's going out．有一天，我在上学的路上发现赵王河公园岸边的道路被严重破坏，一些彩色砖已经不见了，这会影响人们的外出．
①on one's way to 在去…的路上
②that引导宾语从句作found的宾语
③一般过去时的被动语态，was/were+过去分词
④which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的整个句子．
高分句型二：
①Only in this way can we have a more beautiful and comfortable city ②to live in．只有这样，我们才能生活在一个更美丽，更舒适的城市里．
①only位于句首，形成主谓部分倒装．
②动词不定式作后置定语修饰city

解答 Dear Editor，
I'm a high school student．One day，on my way to school I found that along the river bank in Zhaowang River Park，the road was badly destroyed and some color bricks had disappeared，which would affect people's going out．【高分句型一】Perhaps these bricks were carried away by some people nearby and kept by themselves．I'm very sorry about that．【反映环境破坏问题】
Since the public facilities are often destroyed like that，I suggest that our government should repair the road as soon as possible and take some measures to protect these public facilities．And as for us students，whenever we find someone destroying our public facilities，we should make efforts to stop him or her in time．Only in this way can we have a more beautiful and comfortable city to live in．【高分句型二】【我的看法和建议】
Li Qiang

点评 本范文层次清楚，条理分明．短文分为两部分，第一部分是写作者在上学路上看到了一些现象．本段叙述清楚，表达准确．用了宾语从句，定语从句等等表达形式，使得本段生动具体．第二部分是作者的看法与建议．条理清楚，中心突出．本段使用了宾语从句，时间状语从句；还准确恰当地使用了as soon as，take measures，as for，make efforts，in this way等等结构，给本段增色不少．