Question

【题目】亲爱的同学们, 三年的初中生活马上就要结束了, 你们即将离开熟悉的母校和三年来朝夕相处并给予你们无尽关爱和帮助的老师及同学们。一想到以后就要与亲爱的老师和同学们各奔东西, 你一定有很多话想说。请你写一篇文章介绍一位给你印象最深的同学。

要求：1. 词数80词左右, 提示词仅供参考；

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

Answer 1

【答案】I have met many different people in my junior high school. But Lily is the person who impressed me most. She is of the same age with me and she has many hobbies, such as singing, dancing and playing sports. Besides, she is friendly and warm-hearted.

I still remember I did rather badly in physics when I first began to learn it in my eighth grade. I couldn’t understand the teacher well in class and I didn’t dare to ask questions. After Lily knew it, she offered to help me with it. She showed me the right ways to study physics and explained the complex problems to me patiently. With her help, I made much progress and was able to follow my teacher.

Lily is really a good friend. I hope she could also pay more attention to her health besides studying hard. And I wish her happy forever.

【解析】

这是一篇材料作文。介绍自己印象最深的一位同学，人称为第三人称，首先介绍这位同学的姓名，年龄，爱好和性格特征，要用一般现在时态来描述，注意主谓一致。在第二段要去介绍印象最深的一件事情，可根据所提供的短语去组织内容，时态为一般过去时，最后一段给自己的同学提出中肯的建议，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。