Question

【题目】书面表达

你们学校正在创建镇江市节水型学校，倡议全体师生关注水资源，节约用水。请你根据下列表格，写一篇80字左右的作文。

节约用水

重要性

离开水人类就无法生存。

现状

1. 可供人类饮用的水越来越少。

2. 浪费水的情况……

3. 水污染现象……

措施

1、 节约每一滴水，如：……

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Answer 1

【答案】

As we know, water is very important to man, we can’t live without water. The amount of water whichis suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don’t care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. And I think it’s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water. I think whatwe can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can. For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. It’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we live happily. If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us. I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. And I think it’s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water. I think what we can do is that we have tosave every drop of water as possible as we can.等等。