Question

【题目】书面表达（满分20分）

时光飞逝，三年初中生活马上就要结束了。假如你被邀请在毕业典礼上演讲，你想表达你对母校、老师、同学和父母的感恩之情，请根据下表所列要点，用英语写一篇短文。

感恩对象	存栏记忆	未来与祝福
母校	美丽校园，快乐家园	越来越好
老师	工作努力，教授知识，有困难时及时给予帮助	铭记在心
同学	帮助我学习、相处和睦	保持联系
父母	关心照料，帮助我们成长	永远健康开心

注意：1.词数：不少于80词；2. 短文中不得提及真实人名、校名及地名；

3. 短文的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

参考词汇： 永远 forever

Dear head teacher, teachers, parents and fellow students,

Good afternoon. Thank you for giving me a chance to make a speech here. How time flies! We’re just leaving you—our lovely junior high school. I have so many words from my heart to say. _________________________________________________________________________

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Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you ! Goodbye!

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear head teacher, teachers, parents and fellow students,

Good afternoon. …I have so many words from my heart to say.

First，I’d like to say “Thanks” to my dear school. You are a beautiful and happy home for us all. I hope you will be better and better. Second, I must say “Thank you” to our dear teachers. You always work hard and have taught us lots of knowledge .You have helped us when we are in trouble. I’ll remember you forever. Then I will say “Thank you” to my dear classmates. You really help me with my study. We have got on well with each other just like sisters and brothers. Let’s keep in touch in the future. Finally, thank you, my parents. You’ve taken good care of me and helped me grow up. I hope you will be healthy and happy forever.

Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you ! Goodbye!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇演讲稿，内容要点已经给出，学生写作的时候切入点容易找。内容贴近学生生活，可以有感而发。要求学生作文涵盖所有要点，并做适当补充或者拓展，使用多种句型和高级词汇，在个人观点方面要紧扣主题，观点明确，做适当发挥。要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。

写作亮点：本范文层次清楚，条理文明，包含了提纲所列的所有要点。毕业了，作为毕业生对母校、老师、同学最想说的是什么，是“感谢”。本文以“thanks”贯穿全文，既突出了作者写作主题，又使文章内容显得脉络清晰，重点突出。演讲稿极具号召力和感染力。