题目内容

13.如图所示,前段时间媒体报道了多地发生老年人摔倒,
好心人扶起反被诬陷的事件.对老人摔倒扶与不扶的问题,引起了民众的热议,大致有以下两种观点:一是主动扶,助人为乐是一种美德,人人都有需要帮助的时候;二是可先不扶,拨打120或者l10求救,或在多人在场的情况下采取相应措施.你有何看法?请用英语写一篇短文.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数.
写作要求:
1.短文必须先写出热议的两种观点,再谈谈你自己的看法;
2.不得逐句翻译,可以适当发挥;
3.条理清晰,字迹工整,词数不少于80;
4.文中不得盘现真实人名和校名等相关信息.
参考词汇:美德virtue(n.)
If an old man falls down,will you support him with your hands?There are probably two opinions in our life.Some people think….

分析 本文为话题作文,是一篇议论文,着重表达对这种"扶不扶"的两种观点的看法.根据审题,短文可以分四段:第一段对老人摔倒扶与不扶的问题,引起了民众的热议.第二段主动扶,助人为乐是一种美德,人人都有需要帮助的时候.第三段可先不扶,拨打120或者l10求救.第四段谈谈自己的看法.人称主要是第三和第一人称.因为这是社会的一种现象,所以句子应该用一般现在时,要注意上下文之间的衔接.同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采.

解答 参考范文:
If an old man falls down,will you support him with your hands?There are probably two opinions in our life.
   Some people think they should help people in trouble actively.Helping others is a virtue.And everyone may need help at any time or in any place.
   However,other people think they won't help at once.They will call 110 or 120 for help.Besides,they won't help unless there are some others around,for they are afraid to get into trouble.
   I think it's good to help others in a proper way.If everyone is glad to help others,our world will become more beautiful.

点评 在写作前一定要注意审题,这是写好作文的第一步.审题除了内容外,更重要的是要确定文章的人称和时态,这是最基本的东西.行文中注意用一些短语和句式,以增加文章的色彩,如本文中使用的:fall down;help sb in trouble;get into trouble;it's good to do sth等,短文还用了连词if引导的条件状语从句,用了that引导的宾语从句;为了上下文的衔接,使用了一些过渡词,如however,besides等.所以写作时力求句式和词语丰富,这样文章就不会显得单调,才是一篇好文章.

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