Question

19．Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic"My happy day"（以"我快乐的一天"为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格）．
The following points are for your reference：（所给提示仅供参考）
1What happened on that day？
2Why did you feel happy？

Answer 1

分析 本文为提纲作文，且为记叙文．由题目要求可知要用一般过去时来描述，人称为第一人称I或we．写作要点为：1．那一天发生了什么事，事情发生的起因，经过和结果．2．觉得开心的原因．重点短语及词汇：go to the zoo：去动物园there be：有lots of：许多so…that…：如此…以至于…高分句型：1．It took us about two hours to get there by bus．坐公交车去那里花了我们大约两个小时．it takes（took） sb time to do sth表示花费某人时间做某事．2．We didn't go home until 5：00 in the afternoon．直到下午五点我们才回家．not…until句型表示直到…才…

解答 My Happy DayI went to the zoo with my friends last Sunday．It was hot and sunny that day．（高分句型1）It took us about two hours to get there by bus．There were thousands of people in the zoo．We saw lots of animals，such as，pandas，kangaroos，polar bears，giraffes，elephants，tigers，wolves，snakes and so on．We also saw the elephant show．The elephants were so clever that they could do lots of things like us．At noon we had a picnic in the zoo．And then we thew the rubbish into the dustbin．（高分句型2）We didn't go home until 5：00 in the afternoon．（发生的事情） Although we were tired，we learnt many animals，so we felt happy．（感到开心的原因）

点评 考查学生平时短语和词汇量的积累，以及组织语言编故事的能力．要注意记叙类文章表达要有逻辑，条理清楚，说清事情发生的经过和结果．