Question

【题目】书面表达

请你根据下表，写一篇题为”Helen’s living habits”的短文，介绍海伦的日常生活习惯。

要求：可适当发挥，但必须包含表格中的所有信息，70词左右。

	Activities	How often
Good habits	exercise eat fruit and vegetables help with housework	every afternoon every day often
Bad habits	stay up late eat junk food	sometimes three or four times a week

Helen’s living habits

Helen is a middle school students. ______________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Helen’s living habits

Helen is a middle school student. She has lots of good habits. She loves she loves sports and she exercises for half an hour every afternoon. She eats fruit and vegetables every day. At home， she often helps with housework. However， Helen has some bad habits. Sometimes she stays up late to watch or go online. And she eats junk food three or four times a week although she knows it’s bad for her health.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍海伦的生活习惯。写前要认真阅读表格内容，主要从好习惯以及坏习惯两方面来加以描述。根据文章内容可知，人称为第三人称，时态使用一般现在时，这就要注意到主谓一致的问题。在语言的组织上要注意使用多种句式结构，以及长短句的交替使用，这样可以形成文章的亮点。

写作亮点：本篇书面表达段落清晰，层次分明，语言通顺流畅。不仅要点描述齐全，而且使用了丰富的句式。如And she eats junk food three or four times a week although she knows it’s bad for her health.等，给朴素的语言增加了几分色彩。由此可见作者的英语功底很扎实。