Question

【题目】 书面表达（满分15分）

我们生活中处处都有关心和帮助，你也许帮助过别人，也许被别人帮助过，不管是学习上还是生活上；不管是英语的学习上，还是数学的学习上；不管是别人对你所说的一句话还是一段有教育意义的文章、信件等。请你就你生活的经历，写一篇关于帮助的短文，题目自拟, 也可以参考以下题目：

Help Each Other / Take Care Of Others / My Teacher’s Help / My Classmate’s Help 。

要求：1.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。2.围绕中心，主题突出，不偏题。3.字数不少于80个单词。

Answer 1

【答案】

Help Each Other

After class, the students to play on the ground, the playground is lively, skip, some classmates have play hide-and-seek, some.

June day face - boy says to change, suddenly the size of the rain, the playground is just like an arrow as rushed into the classroom. I also like other people rushed into the classroom. Suddenly I heard a voice, "ah", turn head a see, there is a classmate was knocked down on others. I did not rain, steps and two step back. See the blood from his knee and expression appears very painful, speechless, tears in her eyes and round, fast. "I helped you to the clinic?" He nodded his head. We slowly toward the clinic. See the doctor for his uncle wound, I quietly left.

Helping others is a happy things

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如June day face - boy says to change, suddenly the size of the rain, the playground is just like an arrow as rushed into the classroom.等。