题目内容
8.为了积极响应海南省"创建全国文明城市、创建国家卫生城市(National Civilized and hygienic city)"的"双创"号召,改善校园风貌,提高学生素质,给同学们创造一个方便舒适的生活环境的同时也能创建一个文明校园.为此某学校团委正在举办"校园是我家,我爱我家"为主题的征文活动,请根据以下的内容提升你示及要求写一篇征稿.内容提示:1.遵守学校规章制度…
2.尊敬老师,明礼诚信…
3.友善待人,乐于助人…
4.保护校园环境(写2至3个例子)
要求:1.内容必须包括提示信息,且有适当的拓展;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3.词数70-80左右.(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数)
参考词汇:obey(遵守)…rules,respect(尊敬),polite and honest,be friendly to,be ready to help,
protect the school environment
School is my home,I love my school
Recently the activity,"National Civilized and hygienic city"has been on in our school.As students,
what should we do to keep up the good work?First of all,we should
分析 高分句型一:After all,the rules are good for us毕竟,规则对我们有好处.After all毕竟;be good for sb.对某人有好处.
高分句型二:If we do it,our school will be better and better如果我们这样做,我们的学校会越来越好.这是由if引导的条件状语从句,要遵循主将从现的原则;better and better越来越好.
解答 Recently the activity,"National Civilized and Hygienic City"has been on in our school.As students,what should we do to keep up the good work?First of all,we must obey the school rules.We must be polite and honest to others.After all,the rules are good for us.(高分句型一)Don't break them.Second,we should respect our teachers and get on well with our classmates.Third,it's always good to be kind,friendly and helpful to others.Fourth,it's important and necessary to help protect the environment in our school.(对学生所提的几点要求)For example,we shouldn't throw litter about and spit here and there.We have to keep our school clean every day.Besides,we can't pick flowers or step on the grass.(保护校园环境的例子)If we do it,our school will be better and better.(高分句型二)(作者的期待)
点评 (1)句型多样化,不要I(We)…到底,使人觉得乏味.(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句.(3)进一步描绘人或事物时,适当使用定语从句.(4)适当使用分词或分词短语,烘托谓语动词.(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句,增加新鲜感.