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2．据报道，由于缺乏锻炼，中学生的身体素质有所下降，这一情况已经引起社会的关注和教育部门的高度重视，近年来，我市继续开展初中毕业生升学体育考试工作，旨在切实贯彻党的教育方针，全面提高学生身体素质，同学们刚刚参加过初中毕业生升学体育考试，你有何感想？请你根据下面的提示和要求，写一篇90词左右的英语短文．
提示：1．锻炼身体的好处：strong，healthy，energetic…
2．锻炼身体的方式：ball games，running，swimming…favorite sport；
3．请你谈谈对体育锻炼的看法和建议．
要求：1．内容必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
2．开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．语句通顺，意思连贯，调理清楚，字迹工整．
Exercise one hour a day，keep illness away!As we know，taking sports will keep one healthy．It can help us keep strong．The more the young students exercise，the more energetic they will be．As a middle school student，I am busy with study．I have little time to take exercise，but I still do sports as often as I can．I play ball games，running，swimming and so on．My favorite sport is playing basketball．I often watch basketball matches．What's more，I think outdoor activities are sports，too．I also take an active part in other kinds of activities．At weekend I often go for a picnic with my family．I also like climbing mountains，flying kites，boating and so on．I enjoy colorful sports．Let's take sports and keep ourselves healthy before it is too late．．

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分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈对体育锻炼的看法和建议．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．锻炼身体的好处：
2．锻炼身体的方式：
3．请你谈谈对体育锻炼的看法和建议．
常用到的重点短语：
keep healthy 保持健康
be busy with 忙于…
as…as sb can 尽可能的…
what's more 再者
take part in 参加
【高分句型】
1．The more the young students exercise，the more energetic they will be．
"the more…，the more…"句型为"the+形容词或副词比较级，the+比较级"结构，常表示"越…，就越…"，是一个复合句，其中前面的句子是状语从句，后面的句子是主句．
2．I have little time ①to take exercise，②but I still do sports ③as often as I can．
①动词不定式做后置定语，修饰time．
②but表转折
③as…as sb can 尽可能的…

解答 Exercise one hour a day，keep illness away!As we know，taking sports will keep one healthy．It can help us keep strong．The more the young students exercise，the more energetic they will be．【高分句型】（锻炼身体的好处）As a middle school student，I am busy with study．I have little time to take exercise，but I still do sports as often as I can．【高分句型】I play ball games，running，swimming and so on．My favorite sport is playing basketball．I often watch basketball matches．What's more，I think outdoor activities are sports，too．I also take an active part in other kinds of activities．At weekend I often go for a picnic with my family．I also like climbing mountains，flying kites，boating and so on．I enjoy colorful sports．（锻炼身体的方式及看法）Let's take sports and keep ourselves healthy before it is too late．（建议）

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯