Question

书面表达（15分）

前些年，因为搀扶摔倒老人而惹麻烦的事件偶有发生，引发了人们的争论。遇到跌倒老人要不要扶成了人们讨论的热点。上周你们班利用班会对此进行了一次大讨论,同学们提出了不同的观点,请你根据讨论情况写一篇短文,并提出自己的观点.

Some students’ ideas	应该相助，但要学会保护自己，留下证据。
Other students’ ideas	少惹麻烦，避而远之。
Your idea	……

注意：

1. 所写内容必须包括表格中的内；

2. 词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Last week we discussed about if we should help the old who fell down.

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Answer 1

Last week we discussed about if we should help the old who fell down. Some students said that they would help them, but they would learn to protect themselves as well, like leaving some eyewitnesses’ telephone numbers or taking some photos to record what happened.

Other students disagreed. They thought they would hold a serious attitude towards helping the old. In order not to cause a lot of trouble, staying away from the old is a good way to protect themselves.

As for me, I will help the old because I think helping others can make me feel happy. If everyone gives a hand to help others, our society will be full of love!

【解析】

试题分析：本文是对社会存在的现象进行了班级讨论，这里对于这种发表不同观点的短文，应该用三段式，第一段正方观点，第二段反方观点，最后陈述自己的观点，叙述时要注意动词时态及主谓一致的问题。

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式，如：Last week we discussed about if we should help the old who fell down. They thought they would hold a serious attitude towards helping the old. In order not to cause a lot of trouble, staying away from the old is a good way to protect themselves.还用了一些连词if，that等连词，使句子结构更加复杂，增加文章的亮点。

考点：提纲作文。