Question

【题目】越来越多的汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活、但同时也带来了很多问题。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请写一篇有关交通安全的短文，80词左右。内容包含：1. 遵守交通规则，如走人行道，过斑马线。2. 不在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。3. 劝父母不能酒后驾车。

参考词汇： sidewalk人行道 zebra－crossing斑马线 trafficaccidents交通事故 drunk driving酒驾

Answer 1

【答案】With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic, drunk driving and traffic accidents.

Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on sidewalk. When we cross zebra-crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road. We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving, etc. We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody takes traffic safety seriously can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

【解析】

这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下我们的交通安全。所提供的材料中列举了越来越多的汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活、但同时也带来了很多问题。主要从遵守交通规则，如走人行道，过斑马线；不在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球；劝父母不能酒后驾车这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. 随着越来越多的汽车进入我们的家庭，我们很高兴它大大改善了我们的生活。With more and more cars coming into our families是伴随状语；that it has greatly improved our life.是表语从句。

【高分句型二】

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody takes traffic safety seriously can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks. 我们可以说汽车正在进入我们的生活，但只有当每个人都重视交通安全时，我们才能安全地在道路上行驶和在人行道上行走。句子but only when everybody takes traffic safety seriously是强调句；句子can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.是倒装句。