Question

7．请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇关于你的朋友亮亮减肥的故事．并通过此事，谈谈你的感想．要求：
1 90词左右；
2可适当增加细节使行文连贯完整；
3文中不得出现真实姓名；
4 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：overweight，flied chicken，balanced diet，good figure/shape

Liangliang is no longer the boy he used to be-he has changed greatly．Only a year ago，          ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①These changes helped him lose a lot of weight．这些变化帮助他减了肥．本句中help sb do sth帮助某人做某事，后面跟动词原形，lose weight减肥．
②He started to exercise．他开始做运动．固定短语start to do sth开始做某事，后面跟to引导的不定式形式．

解答 Liangliang is no longer the boy he used to be-he has changed greatly．Only a year ago，he was overweight and a little lazy．He got tired easily and did not like sports．His favorite meal was fried chicken and chips（介绍亮亮减肥前的情况）．One day，he realized that he couldn't continue like this．So，he decided to change．He started to exercise（高分句型）．He ran in the school playground every day．He also began eating a healthier diet of more fruits and vegetables，and less meat．These changes helped him lose a lot of weight（高分句型）．He is now a very happy boy in very good shape，and he is always so active．（介绍亮亮如何减肥）
From Liangliang's story，we learn a lot．Where there'a a will，there's a way．（亮亮减肥的启示）

点评 本文是一篇图画作文，在对于诸如此类文章的写作，学生要注意详略得当，做到有条理．学生在平时的练习、学习生活中要善于积累常用的表达多个好处的句型．英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换，同时注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，这样文章才能写出新意，写出文采．