Question

11．在家庭里、在社会中，只要我们从自身做起，我们的行为就可以为实现和谐社会（harmonious society）起到推进作用．你们学校的English Newsletter正在以Doing Our Part（从自身做起）为题举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文．

	行为	作用
在家庭里	（1）帮助父母做家务事 （2）和父母多交流	（1）让父母不要太累 （2）…
在社会中	（1）不乱扔垃圾 （2）… （3）…	（1）使环境美化 （2）… （3）…

展望：如果我们每个人…
要求：
1词数：80～100个．
2征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
3表达清楚，语法正确，要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥．

Doing Our Part
We have grown up and it's time for us to do something for our family and society．
At home，we should help our parents do the housework．They go to work during the daytime and they must be tired after a full day's work．We do the house in order to let them have a rest．We should also talk with them more，it can help us understand each other better．
In society，do not throw rubbish everywhere，we should throw it into the dustbin．It can make our environment more beautiful．Don't use plastic bags when going shopping，we'd better use shopping baskets．If we use them too often，it will become white pollution．
In a word，if each of us do our part from now on，our world will become a harmonious society．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是以Doing Our Part为题说说自己在日常生活中的应该做的文明行为．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1在家庭里（1）行为；帮助父母做家务事；和父母多交流（2）作用：让父母不要太累…
2在社会中：（1）行为：不乱扔垃圾…；（2）作用：使环境美化…
3我的展望
常用到的重点短语：
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
in order to  为了…
let sb do sth 让某人做某事
talk with sb 与某人交流
throw…into…扔进…
【高分句型】
1．They go to work①during the daytime and they ②must be tired after a full day's work．
①during  在…期间
②must be表示肯定猜测．

2．We do the housework①in order to ②let them have a rest．
①in order to  为了…，做目的状语．
②let sb do sth 让某人做某事；have a rest 休息
3．Don't use plastic bags ①when going shopping，②we'd better use shopping baskets．
 ①when going shopping是省略句，完整表达when we go shopping．
②had better do sth 最好做某事

解答 Doing Our Part
We have grown up and it's time for us to do something for our family and society．
At home，we should help our parents do the housework．（帮助父母做家务事）They go to work during the daytime and they must be tired after a full day's work．【高分句型】We do the housework in order to let them have a rest．【高分句型】（让父母不要太累）We should also talk with them more，（和父母多交流）it can help us understand each other better．（帮助彼此了解）
In society，do not throw rubbish everywhere，we should throw it into the dustbin．（不乱扔垃圾）It can make our environment more beautiful．（使环境美化）Don't use plastic bags when going shopping，we'd better use shopping baskets．【高分句型】（购物自带购物袋）If we use them too often，it will become white pollution．（塑料袋会形成白色污染）
In a word，if each of us do our part from now on，our world will become a harmonious society．（展望）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文．是说说日常生活中的文明行为，此类题目常考，课下多总结一些固定句式和短语．注意时态语的搭配及主谓一致问题．写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．