Question

【题目】书面表达。

近年来,由于网络购物的兴起,11月11日成了网络购物狂欢节。2018年双十天猫只花了2分05秒,成交额(GMV)超过100亿元。为了正确引导青少年的购物观念,你班举行了一次关于网络购物的主题班会,下面是你班同学对网络购物优缺点的一些见解,请你以班长的身份,写一篇主题班会内容小结发言稿:

优点:1.在家“逛商场”;节约时间;

2.价格通常比较便宜;

3.可供选择的范围广,品种多。

缺点: 1.只能看到图片,看不到商品本身

2.网络支付不太安全,密码容易被盜。

（写作内容）

1.网络购物优缺点;

2.给你班同学提一条你自己的建议。

（写作要求）

1.词数80-100;包含表格内的所有内容要点;开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;

2.请勿提及真实姓名与学校名称

3.语句通顺,语法正确,可适当发挥。

参考词汇:消费者 consumer密码 password(s)

Dear classmates

With the rapid development of Internet, shopping online has already become a fashion, especially among young people. Comparing with the traditional shopping. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Let 's stop buying blindly but be a smart consumer. Thank you

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Dear classmates,

With the rapid development of Internet, shopping online has already become a fashion, especially among young people. Comparing with the traditional shopping,Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

However， Shopping online also has some disadvantages. On one hand, consumers can only see pictures, you can't see the goods themselves on the Internet. That may cause consumers to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. On the other hand, the network payment is not safe enough, and the password is easy to be stolen.

Let 's stop buying blindly but be a smart consumer. Thank you.

【解析】

题干解读：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是网上购物的优缺点。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，认真审题，根据提示要点列出提纲，短文必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。本文时态主要是一般现在时。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。