Question

【题目】写作2

一位好老师，胜过万卷书。在你的初中生活中，一定会有一位老师给你留下了深刻印象。

某英文网站正在开展以“Thank you, my teacher”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，让更多的人认识你的老师，同时表达你对他/她的感激之情。主要内容包括：哪位老师给你留下了深刻印象，发生了什么事使你印象深刻以及你想对他/她说些什么。

提示词语：kind, helpful, talk with, make progress

提示问题：1. Which teacher impressed you most?

2. What happened to make you impressed?

3. What do you want to say to him/her?

Thank you, my teacher

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Answer 1

【答案】Among all my teachers, my English teacher impressed me most. She is always kind and helpful.

Last year, I did badly in a big test and I found English too hard. As soon as she found this, she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice. With her encouragement, I have made great progress.

I really want to say “Thank you for helping me. I love you!” to my English teacher.

【解析】

题干解读：这是一篇提纲类命题作文。通过审题可知主要以第一人称和一般过去时来叙述三方面内容：哪位老师给你留下了深刻印象；发生了什么事情是你印象深刻；你有什么要对他/她要说的话。注意提示词的使用，写作中注意上下文的连续性，符合逻辑关系。