Question

【题目】假如这幅漫画表现的是你所经历的事情，请根据所给提示描述事情经过并谈谈你的看法。

提示词：jaywalk v.乱穿马路；run the red light闯红灯

注意：文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名。词数80-100。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Friday afternoon, when I was on my way home from school, I saw a group of people jaywalking at the crossing. A volunteer tried to stop them, but no one listened to him. Instead, they ran the red light quickly. Just then, a bus came. One of them was nearly hit by the running bus.

In my opinion, jaywalking is a bad habit. It puts not only yourself but also other people in danger. I hope all of us should keep the traffic rules and stop running the red light. Look both sides / ways when you cross the road.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇看图作文。由于是描述过去的经历，故用过去时态，根据要求用第一人称。末段发表自己的观点用一般现在时。

亮点说明：这篇短文层次分明，语言流畅，能把要点表达清楚。In my opinion, not only…but also等的应用给短文增色不少。