Question

【题目】Write at least 60 words about the topic “ When I met with a difficulty”.(以”当我碰到困难时”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。)

Use the following points as a guide.(短文须包含下列要点)

What difficulty did you meet?

How did you overcome it?

How did you feel after you overcame it?

提示: overcome( overcame, overcome) v.克服

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Answer 1

【答案】Every day we are confronted with many difficulties. In my memory, the most unforgettable one happened last term. I was not good at subjects at school and I couldn't get good marks in exams．I felt worried about my study so I decided to work much harder．I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercises after class．What's more，I often asked my teachers for help．Although I met a lot of difficulties，I didn't give up．Now I have done better in my study．I believe that nothing is too difficult if I put my heart into it．If I meet with difficulties in my life，I should try my best to overcome them．In a word，only the person who overcomes difficulties will be successful

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文。要求以“ When I met with a difficulty”为题，根据所给出的要点提示写一篇短文。本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，时态主要用一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。