Question

【题目】书面表达

幸福是什么呢?是父母细心的呵护，是成功时朋友的祝福，是帮助他人后会心的一笑，还是……？其实幸福很简单，幸福就在你身边。请你以“Happiness”为题，写一篇英语短文，让我们分享你的感受。词数：不少于80。

温馨提示：l、短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。

2、这些词汇也许对你有帮助：treasure(v. 珍惜)，comfort (v．安慰)，share (v．分享)

Happiness

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Answer 1

【答案】Happiness

Dad has been away from our city since he found a job in Guangzhou years ago. He seldom comes back home except Spring Festivals. I stay with Mom and Grandma in the countryside. They care for me a lot. When I meet something difficult, I prefer to talk with Dad on the phone. Grandma also enjoys our chatting online. No matter where Dad is, my family is always full of happiness. How I wish next S pring Festival would come soon so that the whole family can get together!

【解析】

话题作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。