Question

【题目】请根据下面提供的信息，以“My favourite school life”为题写一篇英语短文。要求：1.文中不出现真实姓名和校名。2.词数 60词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3.书写规范，整洁。
1).我们8:00到校，8:30钟才开始上课。
2).上午我们在学校上4节课，11:30放学。
3).下午我们不用上课，在学校我们可以做我们喜欢的事情(We can do what we like.)。可以打篮球、踢足球、跑步、唱歌、跳舞、画画、去图书馆阅读等。
4).晚上我们没有太多的作业，可以放松自己（relax ourselves）。可以9:00上床睡觉，每天有足够的睡眠。
This is my favourite school life. We don't need to get to school early. Every day we enjoy our school life.

Answer 1

【答案】My favourite school life
This is my favourite school life. We don't need to get to school early. We get to school at 8:00. We start our lesson at 8:30. In the morning we have four lessons and we leave school at 11:30. In the afternoon we haven't got any lessons. We can do what we like.We can play basketball, play football, run ,sing songs ,dance and draw pictures.We can also read books in the library .In the evening we don't have too much homework. We can relax ourselves. We can go to bed at 9:00 and have enough sleep . Every day we enjoy our school life.
【解析】这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读材料，然后围绕材料适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。结合所写内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，人称为第一人称，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将所给短语单词用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时注意适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。注意标点符号及大小写等问题，尽量不犯语法错误。