Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是张晓华，下面是你的笔友李军给你写的一封电子邮件。请给他写封回信，帮助他解决一下问题。

要求：

1. 注意书信的格式。

2. 针对问题提出合理的建议。

3. 80词左右。

Dear Xiaohua,

I’m very interested in English. I think English is very useful and important to us. But I find it not easy for me to memorize words. We have many chances to speak English, but I’m very shy. So when it’s my turn to speak, I often feel very nervous. And I’m afraid of making mistakes. I work very hard, but I still can’t improve my English.

What should I do now? Please give me some good advice. Thank you very much for helping me.

Yours,

Li Jun

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Jun,

I’m glad to help you. I think you should memorize words by using them. You can make complete sentences with the words. And you should get much spoken English practice. It’s a good way to join an English language club. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. And get more chances of answering questions in class. Try to get over the problem of shyness.

You are hard-working, and I believe you can improve your English.

Good luck!

Yours,

Zhang Xiaohua

【解析】

本文要求以电子邮件的形式给你的笔友写一封回信，帮助他解决他所遇到的困难。首先，要仔细阅读所给材料，明确笔友李军所遇到的问题。即：（1）记忆单词困难；（2） 由于害羞，发言紧张；（3）害怕犯错误；（4）虽然努力，但是进步不明显。其次，注意书信的书写格式，针对李军所遇到的问题逐一给出建议，要注意表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。本文应用第一人陈，时态为一般现在时态。再次，注意使用本单元所学习的“by+doing”作方式状语的用法，例句如：I memorize new words by making word cards. 等；还可以使用某些亮点句型为作文增色，如：It’s a good way to join an English club. 等。

最后，写出祝福语及落款，再检查单词是否有拼写错误，标点符号是否有使用错误。