Question

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Good Habit（习惯）	Bad Habit
get up early	keep long fingernails
eat healthy food	eat junk food
do exercise	smoke and drink alcohol
regular check ups	smoke and drink alcohol

请根据上面表格提示以How to Keep Healthy为题写一篇80词左右的短文．
How to Keep Healthy
Here are some things you can do to keep yourself healthy．
Having a good diet is very important．This means eating lots of different kinds of food and lots of fresh fruit and vegetables．
Have a good habit．go to bed early and get up early．Don't keep long fingernails．And doing exercise is another good way of keeping yourself healthy．Exercise makes you fitter and helps you relax．
Some things are bad for your health，like smoking and drinking alcohol．It is better to try and give up these things or at least do them less．
It is important to have regular check ups with a dentist who will check your teeth．You can also visit an optician who will check your eyes．
You should ask your doctor for a health check once a year．The doctor will be able to help you spot other problems that you might not have noticed．．

Answer 1

分析 本作文话题考查的是常见的如何保持健康的话题．本题的写作要求是先填写表格，后写作．也就是考查一下构思与落笔的过程．养成良好的写作习惯．要求是包含表格所有内容．本作文要涉及多条保持健康的建议，因此要注意全文的连贯性和整体性．多用连接上下文的副词和短语．文章主要表达方式应以提建议为主．
高分句型：
①Having a good diet is very important．有好的饮食很重要．这里having a good diet在这里是动词的ing形式作主语．
②The doctor will be able to help you spot other problems that you might not have noticed．医生会帮助你发现其他你可能没有注意到的问题．句子中be able to表示能，会．

解答 one possible version：

Good Habit	Bad Habit
get up early	keep long fingernails
eat healthy food	eat junk food
do exercise	smoke and drink alcohol
regular check ups

How to Keep Healthy
Here are some things you can do to keep yourself healthy．（引出话题）
Having a good diet is very important（高分句型）．This means eating lots of different kinds of food and lots of fresh fruit and vegetables．（要有好的饮食习惯）
Have a good habit．go to bed early and get up early．Don't keep long fingernails．And doing exercise is another good way of keeping yourself healthy．Exercise makes you fitter and helps you relax．（好习惯）Some things are bad for your health，like smoking and drinking alcohol．It is better to try and give up these things or at least do them less．（坏习惯）
It is important to have regular check ups with a dentist who will check your teeth．You can also visit an optician who will check your eyes．（定期检查）
You should ask your doctor for a health check once a year．The doctor will be able to help you spot other problems that you might not have noticed（高分句型）．（咨询医生）

点评 本例文是以列举的方式呈现保持健康的建议．写作方式新颖独特．内容非常完整．不仅涉及到了应该做什么和不应该做什么，还增加了有规律性地做检查等预防的建议．结构相对连贯，整体性比较强．语言简练不简单．对所学的重点短语和句式学以致用，恰到好处．