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10.假如你是某中学的学生,上周你校举办了"英语周".请你根据下面表格提示,用英语写一篇短文介绍英语周的活动情况,并谈谈你的感受.
活动时间5月5日至5月9日
参加人员全体学生;英语教师.
活动内容唱英文歌曲;举行英语演讲比赛;看英文电影;…
活动效果…
要求:1)用上所给要点,可以适当发挥;
2)词数:80个词左右.开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地址等相关信息;
4)提示词:能力ability.
Last week our school held an English week.It started on May 5 and ended on May 9.All the students and our English teachers took part in it.During the week,we sang English songs,joined in English speaking contests,and watched English films.We told stories in English.
We became more interested in English and our speaking ability has greatly improved.As everyone knows,practice makes perfect.I learned a lot from the activity.I think it is a good way to learn English.I like it very much..

分析 这是一篇图表作文.内容是介绍英语周的活动情况,并谈谈你的感受.时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时.人称主要为第一、三人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1.活动时间 5月5日至5月9日
2.参加人员 全体学生;英语教师.
3.活动内容 唱英文歌曲;举行英语演讲比赛;看英文电影;…
4.活动效果 …
5.我的感受
常用到的重点短语:
take part in 参加
tell stories 讲故事
become interested in 对…感兴趣
learn from从…获得
【高分句型】
1.①During the week,②we sang English songs,joined in English speaking contests,and watched English films.
①during在…期间
②and连接的三个并列动词短语.
2.①As everyone knows,②practice makes perfect.
①As everyone knows众所周知
②熟能生巧,谚语的使用.
3.I think①it is a good way ②to learn English.
①think后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句.
②动词不定式做后置定语,修饰way.

解答 Last week our school held an English week.It started on May 5th and ended on May 9th.(活动时间)All the students and our English teachers took part in it.(参加人员)During the week,we sang English songs,joined in English speaking contests,and watched English films.【高分句型】We told stories in English.(活动内容)
We became more interested in English and our speaking ability has greatly improved.As everyone knows,practice makes perfect.【高分句型】I learned a lot from the activity.(活动效果)I think it is a good way to learn English【高分句型】.I like it very much.(我的感受)

点评 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心.注意文章文体、人称和时态.这篇作文主要是向人们介绍他们学校的英语周,并交代了参加的时间,地点及内容,学生要按照内容的提示组织句子.温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等.
这是一篇非常优秀的作文,短文中作者按照题目的要求,结构清晰,要点全面.而且作者在写作时,并不是完全按照题目中给出的顺序,逐句翻译的,而是将这些信息进行了整合,让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达,这一点很好.短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范,而且作者还使用了一些较好的句式,增强了文章的连贯性.如We became more interested in English and our speaking ability has greatly improve等为文章增色不少.

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