Question

书面表达。（1题，满分10分）

根据表格中提供的信息，写出一篇短文介绍你及你的朋友琳达（Linda）的相同和不同之处。不少于70词。

	不同点	相同点
琳达	1.比我高，更强壮；2.喜欢听音乐； 3.每天锻炼。	喜欢运动；各门功课都学得好； 喜欢阅读，通常在周末一起去图书馆
我	1.喜欢看电视；2.每周锻炼三次。

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Answer 1

I have a good friend. His name is Linda. We have something different. She is taller and stronger than I.She likes listening to music. She takes exercise every day. She wants to be a basketball player when she grows up. But I like watching TV. I do sports three times a week. I want to be a doctor when I grow up. But we have the same hobbies. We both like sports. We are both good at all subjects. We also like reading. We usually go to the library together at the weekend.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。文章内容很明确，就是写我和朋友之间的相同和不同之处，并给出了相关的信息。在写作时，主要文章的结构要清晰，不要漏掉信息点。可以用第一人称来写，用一般现在时。写作时注意句子的完整性，主谓一致。可适当使用一些连接词，使文章更紧凑，逻辑更清晰。

【亮点说明】这篇文章结构清晰明了，如使用句子 We have something different。我们有不同之处； But we have the same hobbies.但是我们也有相同的爱好；使文章更具条理性。文中也用到了很多短语，如take exercise，do sports，like doing sth., be good at, grow up等，意思表达清晰完整。

考点：材料类作文。