Question

【题目】书面表达

随着网络技术的不断发展，人们传递情感的方式也在不断变化。假如你是王强，上周你就“使用纸质卡片还是电子卡片？”这个话题在班级展开了一项调查。请你给China Daily报社写一封信，介绍此次调查的结果并说说你的观点。

约30%的同学 (纸质卡片)	1. 手工制作，表达真情 　2. 携带方便，便于保存 3. ……
约70%的同学 (电子卡片)	1. 信息量大，传递快捷 　2. 节约纸张，利于环保 3. ……
你的看法	1. ……　2. ……(至少两条)

要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；

3. 词数：100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。

Dear Editor，

I am writing to tell you about the survey I've made on “Using paper cards or ecards？” in our class.

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Yours sincerely,

Wang Qiang

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor，

I am writing to tell you about the survey I've made on “Using paper cards or ecards” in our class.

About 30% of the students prefer to use paper cards. First of all, they are made by hand and they can express people's true feelings. Second, they are easy to take and can be kept for long. Third, people can read them without computers.

However, around 70% of the students prefer to use ecards. For one thing, ecards can carry lots of information and people can send them quickly. For another, using ecards can save paper so that it's good for environmental protection. What's more, people can design the ecards as they like.

As for me, I think we should use ecards more because they can not only help people save money but also protect the earth.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Qiang

【解析】

本文属于话题作文，介绍“使用纸质卡片还是电子卡片”的调查结果以及你的观点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如prefer, be made by, be good for, as for me, be easy to do, first of all, second, third, however, what’s more, for one thing, for another等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。