Question

【题目】写作 (20分)

假如你是Millie, 请你根据以下内容，用英语写一封邀请信。词数90词左右。

1.请你的网友Daniel一起参加你们学校下周五的旅游。

2.计划一天的旅游：早上七点在学校门口碰头，乘两小时的长途汽车到达世界公园，那里有很多名胜古迹的模型，你们将游览金字塔，金门大桥，埃菲尔铁塔等（the Pyramids, the Golden Gate Bridge, the Eiffel Tower）

3.中午乘船游玩，在船上用餐。

4.下午五点左右返回，旅游很累，但很开心。

5.你们一定为每个人安排好愉快的一天，如果他来，请尽快让你知道，你希望他能参加。

Dear Daniel,

I’m writing to invite you to join in our school trip.

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Best wishes.

Yours

Millie

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Daniel,

I’m writing to invite you to join in our school trip. We will have our school trip to the World Park next Friday. We’ll meet at the school gate at 7:00 in the morning. The trip will take us two hours by coach. There are models of over one hundred places of interest from all over the world. We’ll visit the pyramids, the Golden Gate Bridge, the Eiffel Tower. You’ll not be able to believe your eyes when you see them. Because the model pyramids look just like the real ones in Egypt. They are small but wonderful. We’ll take a boat trip at noon and have lunch in the boat. We’ll come back at 17:00. We will be very tired but very happy. We’ll make a really fun day for everyone.

If you want to come, please let me know as soon as possible. I hope you can join us.

Best wishes,

Millie

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要用准确的语言把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般将来时态，主语是第一人称，兼顾第二人称；同时注意不可逐句翻译要点，但短文中应该包含所有要点。写作中要求习作者恰当使用连词，和过渡句，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系；邀请别人参加语气要委婉诚恳。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: places of interest from all over the world来自全世界的名胜古迹the pyramids, the Golden Gate Bridge, the Eiffel Tower. 金字塔，金门大桥，埃菲尔铁塔You’ll not be able to believe your eyes 你会难以相信自己的眼睛等表述准确，本文中连词的使用恰当，语气婉转诚恳，很有说服力。