题目内容
书面表达 (本大题共5分)
假设你是李华,在网上看到了Wildlife Protection Club (野生动物保护俱乐部) 招募志愿者的广告。请你用英语写一封信给俱乐部主席Mr. Brown,申请加入该俱乐部,并表示,如果能加入,将会很开心。请根据表格信息和提示完成申请信。
学校 | Sunshine Secondary School |
年级 | 八年级 |
品德 | 勤奋, 乐于助人 |
爱好 | 篮球和旅游,从小喜爱动物 |
申请理由 | …… |
联系方式 | 0510—87654321,lihua@sunshinetown.com |
注意:1.词数70左右,信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.信须包括所有要点,申请理由用2-3句适当发挥;
3.不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I read your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to join the Wildlife Protection Club.
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__________________________________________I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Mr. Brown,
I read your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to join the Wildlife Protection Club.
I am a student in Grade 8 at Sunshine Secondary School. I am very hard-working and helpful. I love playing basketball and travelling. I loved animals when I was very young. I would like to learn more about animals. And I hope to do something for animals.
I will be very happy if I can be a member of your club. Please call me on 0515-87654321 or e-mail me at lihua@sunshinetown.com.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇应用文写作,写一封应聘信。由于给出的材料比较全面,我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。结合材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,第一人称,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
【亮点说明】这篇短文语言要准确、简明,说明有条理,准确地阐明了自己基本爱好和特长,并包含了文中所要求的全部信息,符合应聘信的格式和要求。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语,包含复合形容词的准确使用为文章增色不少.如 I am very hard-working and helpful,I would like to learn more about animals学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
考点:提纲作文。