题目内容
书面表达(15分)
你的理想是什么?为什么选择这样的理想?你打算怎样去实现它?请以“My Dream”为题,写一篇60词左右的短文。
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My dream
I want to be an artist when I grow up. I like drawing. When I was a little kid, I ever won the first in a drawing competition. I hope to have my own art room. I am taking art lessons every weekend. My art teacher is kind to me. But he is strict with me. I think he can help me to make my dream come true.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇话题作文。本文所给思路比较清晰,动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,主语是第一人称,注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如: My art teacher is kind to me.我的美术老师对我很好;I think he can help me to make my dream come true.我认为他会帮助我实现我的梦想。学习中应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
考点:话题作文。