题目内容
书面表达(10分)
英国男孩Jim来信想在中国征询笔友。假如你是李明,你想Jim成为笔友。请根据下面表格中所提供的信息,用英语给Jim写一封回信,介绍你自己的情况。信的开头和结尾已给出,字数不计在内。要求:字迹工整清楚,50字左右(可适当发挥)。
姓名 | 李明 |
国籍 | 中国 |
年龄 | 13 |
班级 | 七(8)班 |
爱好 | 打篮球/游泳 |
喜爱的颜色/季节…… | …… |
Dear Jim,
Thanks for your letter. I want to be your pen pal in China.
Yours
Li Ming
Dear Jim,
Thanks for your letter. I want to be your pen pal in China. My name is Li Ming. I am 13 years old. Now I am in Class 8, Grade 7. I like playing basketball and swimming. I often play basketball with my classmates after class. My favorite color is red and my favorite season is spring. What about you? What do you like? Wish to receive your letter soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份,给Jim写一封信,想和他成为笔友,在信中介绍自己的情况,题目中给出了表格,有详细的信息,我们可以将表格中的这些内容用正确的英语翻译出来,但是同时我们还要注意表达的连贯,要将这些信息有逻辑性的表达,不能错乱无章。通过分析可知,这篇短文我们应主要使用一般现在时态,第一人称。题目中要求我们可以适当的补充一些内容,要注意补充的内容需符合整体文章的表达需要,不能乱加。短文涉及的话题是学生们平时练习比较多的,因此对写作时使用的词汇、短语和句型都较为熟悉。但我们要尽量的使用好的句型、句式,增加短文的表现力。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,短文中作者按照题目要求,介绍了自己的情况,并表达了想和Jim成为笔友这一愿望。这篇作文首尾相呼应,切合文章主题,先介绍了自己的基本情况,如姓名、年龄、班级,使用的句型有My name is Li Ming. 、I am 13 years old.、 Now I am in Class 8, Grade 7.。然后是自己的爱好,I like playing basketball and swimming. I often play basketball with my classmates after class.还补充说明自己经常打篮球;最后是自己最喜欢的颜色和季节,使用的句型是My favorite season/color is …。尤其是短文的结尾处,使用了两个问句,表达了自己也想了解Jim的情况,想和他成为笔友。整篇短文内容完整,切合题意,表达准确。
考点:提纲类作文。
根据短文内容,从A-F选项中选出能概括每一段主题的最佳选项。选项中有一项为多余项。
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1.
As awareness(意识) of the benefits(好处) of humor increases, most of us want to get all the laughs we can. It seems that almost every day there is another new discovery about the power of humor to help us physically, mentally(精神上), emotionally, and spiritually. Every system of the body responds to laughter in some important or positive way.
2.Many people mistakenly believe that we are born with a sense of humor. They think that when it comes to a sense of humor, “either you’ve got it or you don’t.” this is false. What is true, however, is that the ability to laugh and smile is actually something we are born with. For example, we laughed when we are tickled under the arm, even without thinking about how to react.
3.The parts of the brain and central nervous system that control laughing and smiling are mature(成熟)at birth in human infants(幼儿), but that is not the same thing as having a sense of humor. (After all, when a baby laughs in a small bed, we don’t rush over and say, “That kid has a great sense of humor.”) Your sense of humor is something you can develop over a lifetime. Don’t be nervous before others and try to laugh at yourself – then you will make them laugh too.
4.Humor includes a lot more than laughing and joke telling. Many people worry needlessly that they do not have a good sense of humor because they are not good jokes tellers. More than jokes, a sense of humor requires being willing and able to see the funny side of life’s situations as they happen. In fact, one of the best definitions of a sense of humor is “the ability to see the non-serious element (元素) in a situation”.
5.There may be a thousand different ways to express your sense of humor, but joke telling is only one of those ways. As more discovered about how humor benefits our life, more people will be able to see and enjoy the humor when they are in a difficult situation. Life depends on air, food and water, but it is made easier to live with a good sense of humor.
A.A sense of humor is not an inborn ability. B.A sense of humor can be developed in our life. C.A sense of humor helps us from several aspects(方面). D.A sense of humor means more than telling jokes. E.A sense of humor can be expressed in many ways. F.A sense of humor helps people to enjoy life better. |