Question

【题目】假设你是李华，现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室（dormitory）规定，如不整理床铺，休息时间大声拨打电话，未经许可（permission）动用他人物品，离开寝室不关灯等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯，做个文明室友，你决定写一封电子邮件给他。
要求：（1）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
（2）字数：60-80词（信得开头和结尾已给出，不介入总词数）；
（3）信中不得出现你的真实姓名，学校名和地名。

From：lihua2758@sina.com To: wangming63@sohu.com Subject: To be a great roommate Dear Wang Ming, I'm writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. Best wishes, LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wang Ming,
I'm writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. As we live in the same room, we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other. What's more, we should make our room clean and tidy. Therefore, I hope you can read the following rules and obey them. Rule No.1: When you get up in the morning, remember to make the bed. Rule No.2: Don't make phone calls when we are sleeping. Rule No.3: Don't use others' things without permission. Rule No.4: Turn off the lights before you leave the room. I hope all of us can obey these rules and make our room more and more comfortable.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】此次考查的是应用文一书信体裁，难度为中等。根据题目要求，我们需要以李华的身份告知室友必须遵守寝室规矩，而题目中，恰好给出了足够的提示，并不需要学生再花时间去思考，例如:1.不整理床铺2.休息时间大声拨打电话三.未经许可(permission)动用他人物品4.离开寝室不关灯等。基本只要能够把这四个点用正确的句型翻译出来并稍加修饰，加上连接词，整篇文章就成形了.通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应主要使用一般现在时态，在叙述规则的时候，可以使用一些祈使句，句式简洁，也能起到好的效果