题目内容
【题目】书面表达。
你校要评选“德才双馨”的好少年 “ Excellent Teens with both Ability and Moral Integrity”,你打算推选王辉,请你用英语写一封推荐信。内容提示如下:
1. 痴迷于画画,对自己很严格; 他愿意在任何时候接受新的挑战。
2. 擅长用色彩来表达自己的想法;最喜欢红色,因为红色能使他迅速作出决定;
3. 尽管学习很忙,也从不放弃自己的爱好;
4. 自去年来,已几次在美术大赛中获奖;
5. 经常为大家出力, 如:……
注意:1. 推荐信须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 要点5须用2-3句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
3. 词数在90个左右,信的首尾已在答题卷上给出,不计入总词数;
4. 信件内容请写在答题卷指定位置上。
Dear Sir
I’m writing to recommend Wang Hui to be the Excellent Teen with both ability and Moral Integrity.
Wang Hui ________________________________________________________________
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I think Wang Hui is the most suitable person to achieve the title . I hope that you agree with me.
【答案】
Dear Sir
I’m writing to recommend Wang Hui to be the Excellent Teen with both ability and Moral Integrity.
Wang Hui is crazy about drawing and very strict with himself. He is ready to take on new challanges any time . He is good at using colours to express himself. He likes red best, because red can help him make decisions quickly. Although he is busy with his study, he never gives up his hobby. He has won several drawing competitions since last year. He often helps us. For example, he often spends time helping with the classroom blackboard newspaper. He even does something to make his community more beautiful at weekends.
I think Wang Hui is the most suitable person to achieve the title . I hope that you agree with me.
【解析】
试题分析:根据题目提示,我们应该确定本文的时态应该用一般现在时;注意描述的顺序;注意时态,人称和固定词组搭配,注意连词的运用。注意句子的顺畅,应符合英语的表达习惯。
写作亮点:文中用了许多固定短语,如 be crazy about...,be strict with, be ready to do, be busy with, give up, spend time doing 等;连词because, although, and能够很好的连接文章; 文章的句式也较丰富,简单句、并列句,原因状语从句等都有所使用。根据要求,做了恰到好处的发挥,效果不错。