Question

3．新海浪乐队是一支受欢迎的乐队．以下是有关这支乐队的一些信息，请根据所给的信息写一篇报道，不少于80词．

Name of Band：New Ocean Waves	It was founded in October of 2004
The things they have done： 1．had three major concerts =2．made a hit CD 3．won the best new group of the year	The things they are going to do： 1．to appear on CCTV 2．to go on a world tour next month 3．to have a number one hit some day

Do you know the New Ocean Waves？It's one of the best bands．It was founded in October，2004．
In the past years the band has made great progress．It not only had three major concerts，but also made a hit CD．Best of all，it won the Best New Group of the year．
They have new plans this year．They are going to appear on CCTV．They plan to go on a world tour next month，so don't miss them if you have a chance to go to their concerts．They believe that they will have a Number One hit some day．The band is on its way．
Let's say good luck to them and wish them success．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是介绍一下新海浪乐队．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．简介；新海浪乐队，建立于2004.10
2．事迹；开了三场演唱会，一张流行的CD，获得最佳新乐队
3．计划打算；上CCTV，下个月环球旅行，有一天成为最流行的乐队
常用到的重点短语：
make progress 取得进步
not only…but also 不仅…而且…
be going to 打算
good luck 好运
【高分句型】
1．It not only had three major concerts，but also made a hit CD．
not only…but also 不仅…而且…连接两个对等的成分．
2．They plan to go on a world tour next month，①so don't miss them ②if you have a chance to go to their concerts．
①so连词，表示所以，不能与because连用．
②if引导的条件状语从句．
3．They believe that they will have a Number One hit some day．
believe后是that引导的宾语从句．

解答 Do you know the New Ocean Waves？It's one of the best bands．It was founded in October，2004．（简介）
In the past years the band has made great progress．It not only had three major concerts，but also made a hit CD．【高分句型】Best of all，it won the Best New Group of the year．（事迹）
They have new plans this year．They are going to appear on CCTV．They plan to go on a world tour next month，so don't miss them if you have a chance to go to their concerts．【高分句型】They believe that they will have a Number One hit some day．【高分句型】The band is on its way．（计划打算）
Let's say good luck to them and wish them success．（祝愿）

点评 这是一篇图表类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法．