Question

11．假如你叫李华，是班长．你班将要组织一次郊游（a school trip）．请你根据下面的提示问题给外教Johnson写一封邮件，邀请他参加你们的活动并告诉他你们的安排．
提示问题：
●Where and when will you go？
●How will you go there？（By train？By bus？…）
●What will you do？
●When will you come back？
提示词语：relax，take a walk，play games，plants，animals
Dear Mr．Johnson，
Our class will have a school trip．Would you like to come with us？The followings are our plans．
                                                    
We will be very happy if you can join us．Look forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It's about 20 kilometers from our school，so we will go there by bus．离我们学校大约20千米，所以我们乘坐汽车．
so所以，不能与because连用．
【高分句型二】
We will relax ourselves in the park，such as taking a walk with friends and playing games我们会在公园放松放松，例如和朋友散步玩游戏．
such as例如，举出例子．

解答 Dear Mr．Johnson，
Our class will have a school trip．Would you like to come with us？The followings are our plans．
We will go to Xishan Forest Park next Saturday．（时间和地点）It is a very large national forest park in Beijing．It's about 20 kilometers from our school，so we will go there by bus．【高分句型一】（交通方式）We will relax ourselves in the park，such as taking a walk with friends and playing games．【高分句型二】We will also get to know about plants and animals in the park．（活动）We will stay there for four hours and will come back at about 4 p．m．（返回时间）
We will be very happy if you can join us．Look forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 写作时先要围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，并且要有适当的发挥，在谈到自己的观点时，要结合活动内容，写出自己的观点．