Question

【题目】书面表达

根据中文内容和英文提示词汇，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词汇供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

随着社会发展，一些学生在过生日时追求举办大型的生日晚会以示体面，这可能带来一些问题。Kiddy对此非常困惑，假设你是Tony，请你根据提示内容用英语给Kiddy写一封信，阐述她的困惑，并给她提一些建议。词数不少于80。

提示词汇：染上……的恶习get into bad habit of…；举办hold。

Kiddy’s Problem	1. 不举办(hold)，同学、朋友会不高兴；
	2. 要举办，花费(cost)许多钱，感到烦恼(worried)；
	3. 浪费(waste)时间，不利于学习；
	4. 容易染上抽烟、喝酒的恶习。
Your advice	送卡片作为(as)礼物；…… (至少补充两点)

要求：1. 所给提示内容必须全部用上，可适当发挥；2. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名、班级与学号。

Dear Kiddy,

I know your problem. First, ____________________________________________________

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Hope my advice is helpful.

Yours,

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Kiddy,

I know your problem. In recent years, some students hold big birthday parties to celebrate their birthdays. I think this may bring some problems. First, they spend a lot of money. The students from poor families will feel worried, for they can’t afford an expensive birthday party. Second, they waste a lot of time in celebrating activities. It’s bad for their study. Third, it’s easier for some students to get into the bad habit of smoking and drinking.

I think it’s the right way for us to celebrate our birthdays by giving paper cards as birthday presents. As students, we should spend our money and time on study. Hope my advice is helpful.

Yours,

Tony

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求写一篇关于学生们过生日的议论文。要求中只给出了主要要点，因此要求我们自由发挥的地方较多，只是需要注意不能遗留要求中的要点。动笔前先要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。

写作亮点：本文包含了所有内容要点，文章开篇点题，I know your problem. 特别是一些连词的运用，使语句更加通顺，连贯。时态运用非常准确，且做到了主谓一致，无语法错误。结构严谨。I think it’s the right way for us to celebrate our birthdays by giving paper cards as birthday presents. As students, we should spend our money and time on study.这些句子的运用，使文章很有说服力，阐明了自己的观点。