Question

【题目】书面表达。

要求：请用there be句型描述一下你家里有哪些物品，并描述一下它们的颜色以及它们是属于家庭中哪位成员的。用60个左右词。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My home

This is my home. Look， there are lots of things here. There are two black shoes. They are my mother’s. Look at the bed， there are two shirts. They are white and they are my father’s. There are many toys in the boxes. They are white， black， yellow and red. They are my brother’s. He likes playing toys very much. There are two red dresses in the chair. They are my new dresses. They are beautiful.

This is my home. What about yours?

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇话题作文。写作时应以一般现在时态为主。灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，按要求使用there be句型，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点： 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如： lots of，look at，like doing等；介绍性语言this is及名词所有格的恰当使用， 使文章的表达更具逻辑性、更富条理；文章最后以What about yours?结束，语言灵活多变，值得推广。