题目内容
【题目】21世纪英文报正在举办“My Role Model”的征文活动。假如你是李华,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈谁是你心目中的偶像,举例说明为什么他/她是你的偶像,以及你从他/她身上学到了什么。
提示词语:learn new things, hard-working, give up
提示问题:● Who is your role model?
● Why is he/she your model?
● What have you learned from him/her?
My Role Model
Everyone has a role model.
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【答案】My Role Model
Everyone has a role model. Lucy is my role model. And she is smart and enjoys learning new things. And she likes reading. She learns how to search for reading materials on the Internet and do the reading every day. What’s more, she is hard-working. So she always gets good grades. When she meets some difficulties in her study, she asks her teacher for help. She never gives up. I will learn from her.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给21世纪英文报投稿,题目是My Role Model,在文章中谈一谈谁是你的偶像,举例说明他/她为什么是你的偶像以及你从他/她身上学到了什么。我们应根据题目给出的提示语和提示的问题,组织语言,串联成文。写作时,应注意以下几点:首先是内容,要符合写作要求,要完整,包含所有信息,不能遗漏要点;其次是表达,要注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语。语法要规范,选择适当的时态和人称。以简单句为主,注意句式结构,为提升文章档次,可以点缀几个高级句型,如复合句、非谓语动词等。