Question

【题目】微笑是人类最美的语言。某英文报以“Smiles”为题,举办中学生征文活动。请根据下面的图表信息,写一篇英语短文。内容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故亊以及故事给予你的启示。

提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3.词

数不少于80。

Answer 1

【答案】Smiles

A smile is the most beautiful language of human beings. A smile is like the sunshine in winter. It warms our hearts and helps us get on well with each other. A person who often smiles usually brings good luck. What’s more, smile can give us confidence.

When I was young, I was very shy. I was afraid to speak in public. One day, I needed to give a speech in my English class. I was so frighten that I did badly at the beginning. But when I saw a big smile on my teacher’s face, I got more and more confident. Finally, I made it.

Smiles are very helpful in our daily lives. We should often keep smiles on our faces, If we are happy, we smile. If we meet difficulties, we should smile, too. Let’s smile to life.

【解析】

这是一篇图表作文。要求以“Smiles”为题，根据图表提示信息，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故亊以及故事给予你的启示。根据所给的提示材料可知文章时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一人称。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。