Question

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KIDS HAVE AN OPINION TOO!

Hi! I’m Sigmund Friend, the editor (编辑) of a new magazine KIDVOICE.

We like hearing from kids. We know you’ve got things to say.

We want to hear from you.

Here is a topic you might have an opinion about. . .

注意：

1.对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2.词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Kids and Learning

All kids want to be good at learning. ▲

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Answer 1

【答案】Kids and Learning
All kids want to be good at learning．Some children are good at learning，but some children are good at playing，and they are not good at learning，why？This is because some children know how to balance learning and studying．
First，just as the saying goes"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy"，a good learner should know to play properly，if he or she plays happily，he will try to learning well．Besides，all learning decrease the interest of study．Second，students should make a proper time list，and try to follow the list．Last，parents and teachers should give tips to the students so that students can have a good knowledge of the study．All in all，only when we balance the relation between playing and learning，can we be good at learning．

【解析】本文属于图画作文，主要写一篇关于孩子和学习的的作文。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如be good at, this is because, as the saying goes, All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, properly, follow, tip, knowledge, besides以及all in all等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。