题目内容
【题目】每个人都有自己的业余爱好,有益的业余爱好不但可以陶冶我们的情操,增强我们的体质,放松我们的身心,还能让我们在学习或工作时精力更旺盛,效率更高。作为一名中学生,你在忙碌的学习之余做些什么?请根据以下提示写一篇短文,谈一谈你的业余爱好。
(一)写作要点提示:
1)你的业余爱好是什么;
2)重点讲述你从事业余爱好的一次经历;
3)你的业余爱好对你学习、生活的影响。
(二)写作要求:短文的内容应包含所提示的要点,语言要流畅,可围绕提示要点适当增加情节,使短文的意思连贯;短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名;短文的词数在90个左右。
【答案】My Hobby
I like drawing. It does bring me happiness.
As a kid, I was keen on those lines and curves drawn on paper made into animals and scenes. It really could show beauty to people and express my feelings. And then I took a course so that I could get close to it and see it well. But at that time, I just did it for fun.
Years went by, I got into a long period of time filled with pressure in study. And I found it so good a way to relax. It did not any longer play an unimportant role in my living, but became my friend.
Since that time, I have felt it like a nice person deep in my heart who can talk with me with true words and make me happy with life. This is my hobby, not just a hobby, but also a true friend.
【解析】这回死一片给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般过去时态来写,要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。